Secret Santa gift art for of her FC Sailor Blizzard. I always get this worry feeling that I've destroyed someone's OC/FC whenever I draw them but I hope they like it.
I also used this as sort of an experimental piece ( fffff- who experiments with a gift art !? ) for a different way of doing my lineart which takes me a lot longer to do but I think it's better to start doing it this way. Besides I felt pretty good after finishing this even though I can spot some mistakes. But i'll stop myself before I nitpick it to death.
Picture is really well done. Her hair is very long and take most part of the picture, and because of that you could shade it a little bit more, but it's still very good Her eyes are stunning, they stand out just in the way they should and they give her ''life''. Her pose is very casual, You could have maybe done something more. Her clothes is very pretty though. Background color goes very well with the rest of the picture, if you done something else it maybe wouldn't be that good. This way character really stood out of the whole picture. Sketch is very well done, and color of the sketch fit perfectly with rest.
I really like this picture, the colors work so well together, and the style you colored in is adorable :3 I think this style of lineart goes fairly well with the coloring too. The only thing to this is I would have tried to use shading that stood out a little more, as the colors seem to blend, but it doesn't take much away from the photo anyhow. Her eyes are gorgeous and I only wish you had put her in a more dynamic pose, maybe done something different with her arm than just having it behind her back? Her anatomy is great though. I think having her hair cover some of her body throws it off a little to me, but again nothing major that takes much away from the picture. I think drawing a collar bone would have been a lovely little detail to add too but everything's so cute already, not much else I could say besides great job, I'd be a happy person to have my OC drawn like that.
I was just browsing through da when i came across this picture again *^* and well I had an urge to tell you again how much i ADORE it! Really it was the best christmasgift i could have wished for ^^
Her hair is very long and take most part of the picture, and because of that you could shade it a little bit more, but it's still very good
Her eyes are stunning, they stand out just in the way they should and they give her ''life''. Her pose is very casual, You could have maybe done something more. Her clothes is very pretty though.
Background color goes very well with the rest of the picture, if you done something else it maybe wouldn't be that good. This way character really stood out of the whole picture.
Sketch is very well done, and color of the sketch fit perfectly with rest.
Final rate: 4.5/5
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